The new bride was mocked by her in-laws for not ha...

The new bride was mocked by her in-laws for not having children, but every day, a wild mongoose came to eat the food she gave it. One day, she went into labour—and gave birth to…

The Mongoose Child of Amravati

Part I – The Bride Without a Cradle

In the village of Amravati, near the cotton fields of Vidarbha, there was a house that was known for two things — its big neem tree in the aangan, and its loud mother-in-law, Kamalabai.

Kamalabai had one son, Suresh, who worked as a lineman in the MSEB office. When Suresh got married, Kamalabai had demanded a grand wedding. She got it. Her new bahu, Meena, came with a steel almirah, a mixer-grinder, and a soft, quiet nature. Meena was only twenty-two, with eyes that were always a little down, and hands that were always busy.

Meena was Indian in that complete way — she woke up at 5 AM, put rangoli in front of the door even in summer, made perfect round phulkas that puffed up like balloons, and never answered back. She was the kind of girl our dadi’s call Lakshmi-like.

For one year, everything was fine. Then the second year started, and Kamalabai started looking at Meena’s stomach.

“Arey, when will we hear good news?” she would ask loudly in front of neighbours who came to borrow curd.

Meena would go quiet.

After two years, the asking became taunting. After three years, the taunting became insult.

“Empty field,” Kamalabai called her. “Banjar zameen. I brought a bahu so that my lineage will go forward, not so that she will just eat and sweep. What is the use of a tree that gives no fruit? Even the goats in our shed give birth every year.”

Suresh was not a bad man. He was just a tired man. He would come home late from duty, eat, and say, “Meena, don’t take tension. Let it go. Mother is old.”

But Meena took all the tension inside her. She went to the government hospital, they said everything is normal. She went to the dargah, tied a thread. She went to the temple, did upvas on Thursdays. Nothing happened. Her lap remained empty.

The only time she felt peaceful was in the afternoon, after lunch, when Kamalabai slept and Suresh was on duty. The house became quiet. The neem tree made a cool shadow in the aangan. And that was when her only friend came.

It was a wild mongoose. A small, brown, clever-faced nevala. Not a pet. A real wild one, with a long tail and eyes like black beads.

He had first come because Meena used to keep some leftover rice near the tulsi plant for the crows. The mongoose came and ate the rice. Meena did not throw a stone. She smiled. From next day, she kept a small katori of rice with a little curd separately for him.

Every day at 2:30 PM sharp, he came. Rain or heat. He would come from the hole near the water tank, look at Meena, and make a soft cheek-cheek sound. Meena would keep the katori down and move away. He would eat, clean his mouth with his paws like a very mannered man, and sit for two minutes, looking at her, as if saying thank you. Then he would run away.

Meena started talking to him.

“Today also no good news, nevale bhai,” she would whisper. “Your bhabhi is being called banjar again. At least you come daily to eat. That is my luck.”

The mongoose listened. Animals in villages listen more than humans.

This went on for almost a year. One wild mongoose and one lonely new bride. Both hungry for something that was not rice.

Part II – The Rice and the Labour Pain

In the fourth year of her marriage, something changed in Meena.

She started feeling dizzy in the mornings. She started liking raw tamarind. She missed her monthly cycle. Her eyes became brighter. She did not tell Kamalabai immediately, because she was scared. What if it is false hope again? What if Kamalabai says, “You are doing drama to get sympathy”?

But one afternoon, when the mongoose came, she could not control. She kept the katori of rice and said, “Nevale, today I think… I think someone is inside me.”

The mongoose stopped eating. He looked at her stomach for a long time. Then he came very close to her feet and touched his nose to her ankle, very gently.

Meena laughed and cried at the same time.

That night she told Suresh. Suresh was so happy he brought jalebi from the market. Kamalabai, for the first time in three years, put her hand on Meena’s head and said, “Now you have proved you are a woman. Take rest. Don’t lift heavy matka.”

For six months, Meena was treated like a queen. She was given ghee, she was given rest, she was given new saree. The whole village said, “See, finally Meena’s god has listened.”

The mongoose still came daily. Now Meena gave him two katoris — one rice, and one small piece of jaggery which she craved herself. He would eat and then sit near her swollen feet, guarding her like a small, brown soldier.

In the seventh month, on a night of Amavasya, when there was no light and the power had gone, Meena got her labour pain.

It was sudden and very strong. Suresh had gone to the next village for a transformer repair. Kamalabai was alone at home. She called the dai maa, the old midwife, Shantabai.

Shantabai came with her cloth bag. Kamalabai boiled water. Meena was on the cot in the inner room, sweating, clutching the bedsheet, chanting “Vitthal Vitthal.”

The pain was different. It was not only in her stomach. It was in her whole body, like something wild was trying to come out.

After two hours of pain, around 2 AM, when the village dogs started howling together without reason, Meena screamed one last time and then became silent.

Shantabai held up what had come out. She did not say, “It’s a boy” or “It’s a girl.” She screamed.

Kamalabai came running inside with the lantern. She saw it and her lantern fell down.

Meena, half unconscious, lifted her head and saw her child.

On the bloody jute sheet, instead of a human baby, there was a tiny, wet, pink, shivering baby mongoose — no bigger than a small brinjal, with closed eyes, a thin tail, and a mouth opening and closing for milk — and as Meena fainted from shock, the wild mongoose who ate rice daily entered silently from the window hole, picked up the baby mongoose by the scruff of its neck as if it were his own, and kept it near Meena’s chest, proving that her child was not human at all.

Part III – The Child Who Rode a Cat

By morning, the news had spread to the whole of Amravati. “Kamalabai’s bahu gave birth to a nevala!”

People came to see, not with blessings, but with fear. The sarpanch came. The temple priest came. Some said, “This is black magic. She fed a wild animal daily, so she gave birth to an animal. This is her sin.”

Kamalabai cried and beat her chest, “I told this girl not to feed that jungli animal! See what she has done! She has brought shame! She has given birth to a rat!”

Suresh came back in the morning and saw his wife holding a small baby mongoose wrapped in a small cotton gamchha, trying to feed it milk with a small spoon. He did not say anything. He just sat down on the floor and put his head in his hands.

Only Meena did not feel shame. When she held that tiny creature, when it made that small kui-kui sound and curled around her finger, she felt what she had wanted to feel for four years — a mother’s feeling. Her breasts had milk. Her lap had weight.

She named him Nevu. Nevu Patil.

She kept him in a small wooden tokri near her bed. She fed him milk, then mashed rice, then small pieces of banana. The big wild mongoose — who Meena now understood was Nevu’s father in some divine way — stopped coming daily. He came only once a week now, stood at a distance, and watched, like a father who knows his son is in safe hands.

Nevu grew very fast. Mongoose children grow faster than human children.

In three months, he was as big as a small rabbit. He could run around the whole house. He did not behave like a wild mongoose. He behaved like a human child trapped in a mongoose body.

He would bring small things to Meena — a bangle that had fallen behind the almirah, a hair clip, a piece of jaggery. When Kamalabai shouted at Meena, Nevu would stand between them, his small hair standing up, making a hissing sound, protecting his mother.

And then, in his sixth month, he did something that no mongoose in Maharashtra had ever done.

Kamalabai had a fat, lazy, white cat named Manju. Manju was the queen of the house. No one could touch her. Nevu, who was now half the size of the cat, became friends with her. Slowly, he would climb on her back. Manju, surprisingly, allowed it.

One day, Meena saw from the kitchen window — Nevu was riding on Manju’s back, like a small warrior on a horse, going towards the back door where the dates tree was. The village’s date palm was outside Kamalabai’s fence, but the branches came inside. The dates were always eaten by crows.

Nevu rode the cat to the base of the tree. Then he jumped, climbed the tree with amazing speed, plucked two ripe, brown dates, came down, put them on the cat’s back, and rode back.

He came to Meena and kept the two dates at her feet.

Meena was stunned. “For me?”

Nevu nodded. Yes, mongoose nodded like a human child.

From that day, it became his daily job. Every evening, Nevu riding Manju the cat, going to steal dates, sometimes chana from the neighbour’s field, sometimes a small piece of roti from the temple prasad, and bringing it to his mother. He never ate before she ate.

People of Amravati stopped calling him a curse. Children started coming to see “Nevu who rides a cat.” They would bring small biscuits for him. Kamalabai, slowly, started keeping a small katori of milk for him also. She would not admit, but when Nevu brought her a date also, she ate it.

Suresh once told Meena at night, “I don’t know what he is. But he calls you Maa with his eyes. That is enough.”

Part IV – The Dates and The Debt

Nevu was now one year old. In mongoose years, he was a young boy. In human years, he was maybe five.

He was very strong and very clever. He had learned to open the kitchen dabba. He had learned to close the door at night. And he had one fixed habit — every evening, he would ride Manju and go and get exactly two dates for his mother. Not one, not three. Two. Because Meena always ate two dates after dinner for strength.

One day, the owner of the date palm, a cruel man named Patil Seth who owned the big kirana shop, saw Nevu plucking dates.

He took a big bamboo stick and hit Manju hard. Manju screamed and ran away. Nevu fell down from the tree, almost ten feet high. His leg got twisted. He limped back home, with no dates, crying with a sound that was half animal, half child.

Meena saw his leg, she cried more than him. She applied haldi and oil. She did not sleep whole night, keeping his small head on her lap.

Next morning, Patil Seth came to their house shouting, “Your jungli nevala is stealing my dates! I will complain to forest department! They will take him away and put him in a cage!”

Meena folded her hands. “Sethji, he takes only two dates daily, for me. I am his mother. Please forgive, he is small.”

Sethji laughed, “Mother? You are mother of a mongoose? You are mad woman! Look at you! God gave you a mongoose because you deserved only a mongoose!”

That night, Nevu was not able to sleep because of pain in his leg. But he kept looking at his mother, who had not eaten her two dates, and who was crying quietly so that Kamalabai does not hear.

At around midnight, when the whole house was asleep, Nevu did something strange. He dragged himself to the corner of the room, where Meena kept her small Devi photo. He sat in front of it. And he started making a continuous, low, vibrating sound, like a prayer. His whole small body was shaking.

Manju the cat came and sat beside him. The neem tree outside started rustling even though there was no wind.

Meena woke up hearing the sound. She saw her mongoose child praying. She came and sat near him. She put her hand on his head.

“Nevu, what happened, beta? Leg is paining too much?”

Nevu looked at her. And for the first time, tears came out of his mongoose eyes. Real tears.

Part V – The Transformation

What happened after that, Meena tells differently every time she tells, because some miracles cannot be told in straight lines.

She says that after she touched Nevu’s head, a soft, golden light came from the Devi photo. Not bright like tube light, but soft like diya light. And that light fell on Nevu.

Nevu’s body started to shake more. His brown fur started to shed, like old clothes falling off. His long tail became smaller and smaller. His small mongoose face — with that pointed nose and bead eyes — started to become rounder. His paws became small hands, small human hands with five fingers.

Meena was not scared. She held him tight.

Within two minutes, on her lap, wrapped in that small cotton gamchha, there was no mongoose.

There was a small, cute, pink human baby boy. Maybe two months old. Bald head, big black eyes, chubby legs, and a small mole on his left cheek — exactly like Suresh had when he was a baby, as Kamalabai always told.

The baby opened his mouth and did not make a kui-kui sound.

He said, in a small, broken, human baby voice, “Maa.”

Meena screamed. But this time, it was not a scream of pain or shame. It was a scream of a dam breaking.

Kamalabai and Suresh came running. They saw a human baby boy on Meena’s lap, sleeping peacefully, holding Meena’s finger with his whole fist. On the floor was a small heap of brown mongoose fur. Manju the cat was licking the baby’s feet.

Kamalabai sat down on the floor with a thud. She touched the baby’s feet and started crying loudly, “My grandson! My grandson has come!”

Suresh just stood with his mouth open, tears flowing down his rough cheeks.

From the window hole, the big wild mongoose — Nevu’s father — was watching. He looked at the human baby once, nodded his small head as if his duty was done, and then turned and disappeared into the cotton fields, never to come back again.

Meena held her son close to her chest. Her milk, which had come for a mongoose, now was exactly for a human baby.

Next day, the same village that had called her banjar and cursed her, came with drums. The temple priest came and said, “This is not black magic. This is Devi’s blessing. This woman fed a hungry creature every day without expecting anything. So the Devi gave her a child who first learned to serve his mother by riding a cat and stealing dates, and then became human to call her Maa properly.”

Patil Seth, the date palm owner, came and kept a whole bunch of dates at Meena’s door and said, “Forgive me. From today, all dates on my tree are your son’s only.”

Meena named her human baby also Nevu. Nevu Suresh Patil.

Today, Nevu is six years old. He goes to the Zilla Parishad school. He is very clever. He still brings two dates daily for his mother, but now he does not need to ride Manju the cat. He goes by himself, climbing the tree like a monkey, and Manju watches from below like an old grandmother.

And sometimes, when Meena is alone in the aangan in the afternoon, she keeps two katoris of rice near the tulsi — one for the crows, and one for any wild mongoose who may come. Because she knows, some children first come to eat rice, and later they come to call you Maa.

Disclaimer: This story is fictional and created for entertainment purposes only. Any names, characters, places, or events are fictitious or used fictitiously. No real person or organization is intended to be portrayed.

Related Articles